Editor critiques the first page of a Fantasy manuscript in real-time! скачать в хорошем качестве

Editor critiques the first page of a Fantasy manuscript in real-time!

Ever wonder what an editor or agent is thinking about as they read through the opening pages of a manuscript? Now you can find out! In this real-time critique of the first page of a Fantasy manuscript, I'll talk about what the writer does well, what they can work on in their next round of revisions, and explain my logic so (hopefully!) it can be a positive learning experience for all of us. Where do I get these pages? First page critiques are a new segment I'm offering to my patrons. That means this page was written by a living, breathing human. While I'll welcome craft discussion in the comments section, please keep it constructive and kind. Yes, writers need to have a thick skin for critique, but that doesn't mean we get to be careless with our feedback. Is this really how you edit? Yes! The primary difference between this video and my edits is how I'm communicating my thoughts. In an actual edit, I'd make note of my feedback either in the margins or in the notes for my editorial letter. Ready to read with me? Let's get started! -Cee ✨ Your support keeps this channel going:   / ceemtaylor   ________________________________ Want me to take a look at your prose? I do short & sweet substantive edits on the first 5k words of manuscripts for authors looking for help with their writing (or help polishing for querying). You can learn more about 5k Passes here: https://www.cameronmontaguetaylor.com... ________________________________ ✍ Resources ✍ 🌟 GET BONUS CONTENT + SUPPORT THE CHANNEL: (  / ceemtaylor  ) 🧾 WORK WITH A PRO EDITOR ON YOUR MANUSCRIPT: https://www.cameronmontaguetaylor.com... 📘 GET MY NOVEL PLANNING GUIDE: https://www.etsy.com/listing/13737830... 💌 CHECK OUT THE NEWSLETTER (DON'T MISS AN UPDATE!): https://www.cameronmontaguetaylor.com... 📚 READ MY STORIES: https://www.cameronmontaguetaylor.com... 🧙‍♂️ FOLLOW 🧙‍♂️ bluesky: https://bsky.app/profile/ceemtaylor.b... tiktok:   / ceemtaylor   patreon:   / ceemtaylor   🔮 ABOUT ME 🔮 Hi! I'm Cameron Montague “Cee” Taylor. As a freelance developmental editor, I set out to help my authors navigate their edits while staying true to their creative vision. When I'm not hard at work on my clients' manuscripts, I'm pecking away at my own. I write Fantasy set in far-flung worlds with LGBTQIA+ heroes and strong romantic subplots. When I don’t have a pen in hand, you can find me on the water, underwater, or snuggling my Editpurr-in-Chief. 🐈 #howtowriteprose #writingtips #writingadvice #howtowriteabook #fantasywriting