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This Common App Essay is Pure Fire 🔥🔥🔥 | Editing YOUR Essays Until You Get In

What happens when a Boy Scout tries backyard chemistry… and ends up nearly blowing off his eyebrows with violet flames? 🌌🔥 In this video, I break down one of the most unique college essays I’ve ever read. From makeshift experiments with antifreeze to campfire chemistry nights, this essay shows creativity, resilience, and a spark (literally). I’ll reveal: Why strong openings matter (and how to fix weak hooks) The “show AND tell” formula that admissions officers love The biggest essay mistake students make (the “student in a cave” problem) How to add community impact so your essay actually stands out Want your essay reviewed on the channel? Like, comment, and subscribe—then send your draft to the contact below: [email protected] Time Stamps 0:00 This Essay is FIRE 🔥 0:23 Boy Scout vs. Snowstorm 1:02 Cooking Hands Like Broccoli?? 2:18 Violet Flames Erupt! 3:15 Why the Hook Needs More Spark 4:21 Backyard Chemistry Gone Wrong 5:02 Show AND Tell (The Secret Sauce) 5:58 The Power of Mystery in Storytelling 6:38 Pizza, Meatballs &… Strawberries?! 8:58 The Fatal Mistake (Student in a Cave) 10:29 Fixing It: Campfire Chemistry Nights 11:25 Let Others Brag For You 12:04 How to Get Your Essay Reviewed #elevatedschool #collegeessay #commonapp Hi! We're Kevin and Jeffrey, two Yalies who founded the ElevatEd School, a platform dedicated to helping you articulate and express your most authentic self. We teach creative writing, critical thinking, communication skills, applying to college--- you name it! Want to work with us? Visit ► www.elevated.school How to Get Into an Ivy League School in 2024 ►    • How to Get Into the Ivy League in 2025   Editing YOUR College Essays ► https://studio.youtube.com/playlist/P... How to Get Into Any School ►    • How to Get Into ANY College   Interviews With Former Students ►   • Interviewing Our Past Students!   ♪ Affogato (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - affogato (no copyright music)   ♪ Alone (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - alone (no copyright music)   ♪ Branch (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - branch (no copyright music)   ♪ Butter (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - butter (no copyright music)   ♪ Chocolate (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - chocolate (no copyright music)   ♪ Home (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - home (no copyright music)   ♪ River (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - river (no copyright music)   ♪ Rose (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - rose (no copyright music)   ♪ Travel (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - rose (no copyright music)