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OET Writing: Rehab Referral Letter for Mr McDonald (Fix Your Past Tense!)

Struggling with OET Writing referral letters – especially past tenses and grammar? In this lesson, I review and correct a real student OET referral letter for Mr McDonald, a post–knee replacement patient being referred to a rehabilitation unit. We walk through the letter line by line and focus on: How to make the purpose immediately clear Avoiding “copied case notes” style (he/he/he short sentences) Getting past tenses right (underwent vs has undergone) Using articles and passive structures correctly Grouping information logically for Content & Organisation OET Referral Letter Julian McDo… By the end, you’ll understand why small grammar issues (especially tense and articles) can quietly pull your OET Writing score below 350 – even if your ideas and content are good. In this video: 0:00 Intro & scoring reminder (aiming for 350+ / Grade B) 1:10 First read-through of the referral letter 3:00 “Underwent” vs “has undergone” – choosing the right tense 6:00 Fixing passive forms: was controlled / was resolved with… 8:30 Why “he, he, he” looks like case notes – and how to fix it 11:00 Grouping social and medical history (gout, hypertension, living alone) 13:30 Making the rehab request crystal clear for the reader 16:00 Final verdict: what’s good, what risks your score, and what to fix first Who is this for? Doctors and nurses preparing for OET Medicine / Nursing Candidates stuck around C+/B- who keep missing 350 in Writing Anyone who wants to see how an examiner-minded teacher rewrites a real referral letter into a clearer, more clinical version If you find this helpful, check out my other OET Writing breakdowns and real student letter corrections on the channel. Copyright Disclaimer under Section 107 of the Copyright Act 1976: This material is used for purposes of criticism, comment, news reporting, teaching, scholarship, and research. Add me on LinkedIn:   / kevinanthonydean   and my newsletter:   / the-english-native-7379048942426206208   Check out my podcast for OET: https://open.spotify.com/show/70XL891... My general English podcast: https://theenglishnative.com/ My YouTube channel:    / @theenglishnative   And, if you need one to one tuition: https://www.italki.com/en/teacher/107... Transcripts for all my OET episodes here: https://www.notion.so/OET-Speaking-Hu...