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beta reading YOUR query letters! 💌 tough love querying tips

thank you so much to the writers who sent in their query letters for this episode of "open workshop"! these were genuinely great pitches and i loved reading them. as always my edits are only suggestions and my thoughts are based on my personal experience as a writer querying for traditional publishing last year + what i learned while revising my own pitch with my agent. i myself am not a literary agent - always take feedback with a grain of salt. i hope the discussion is helpful. (please be constructive, not destructive, when sharing any feedback in the comments.) ⭐️ writers featured in order: Alyssa / ‪@alyssa.and.the.books.‬ Anaïs Garnett / IG: anais.garnett Rachel / IG: @rachel.writes.fiction Sahra / Twitter: @sahrakoshin Alycia / IG: @alyrosetea & TikTok @alyciaroseoffical related videos: my query letter breakdown video:    • how I wrote my query letter | step-by-step...   signing with my literary agent:    • I signed with a literary agent 🌱 querying ...   ☕️ support the channel by leaving a tip or get access to beta reading slots + extra/early content by joining my monthly memberships: https://ko-fi.com/krismf/tiers 0:00 intro and important disclaimers 0:52 first query - adult thriller 7:03 second query - multi-pov YA fantasy/thriller/dark academia 14:48 third query - literary fiction/suspense 20:42 a note on writing multi pov pitches ft. example 24:46 fourth query - adult science fantasy 35:05 fifth query - literary sci-fi/cyberpunk 43:52 thank you for your pitches!! 44:33 conclusion ₊˚⊹⋆₊˚⊹⋆₊˚⊹⋆₊˚⊹⋆ 📬 business enquiries: [email protected] / about / i'm kris (she/her), a speculative fiction writer documenting my writing process, ongoing projects and chatting about craft ☀️ / published work / LOCAL HEAVENS (Fall 2025, Bindery Books/Inky Phoenix Press) preorder news coming soon ↠ add on goodreads:   / local-heavens   ↠ add on storygraph: https://app.thestorygraph.com/books/8... SWAY WITH ME UNTIL WE BLEED (Augur 6.1): https://augursociety.org/sway-with-me... / where to find me / 💌 free newsletter: https://kmfajardo.substack.com/ ☕️ support my work through ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/krismf website: https://kmfajardo.com/ socials:   / krismfajardo     / krismfajardo   https://bsky.app/profile/kmfajardo.bs...   / km_fajardo   | updates only / semi-inactive 🎧 music: DAVI JUNO - Night Swim - https://thmatc.co/?l=D20AA1EE 🌱 my keyboard (affiliate link): https://epomaker.com/products/epomake... ↠ the keyboard switches I have are the LEOBOG Reaper Switches #authortube #writing tags: query letter, querying, querying advice, querying tips, query letter example, literary agent, how to write a query letter, how to get a literary agent, traditional publishing, writing tips, writing advice, writing craft, sci-fi, fantasy, thriller, literary fiction, dark academia, cyberpunk, authortube, writer